I remember when I first met Johnny while kicking the football on a Sunday night at 10:27pm (very specific - do you think you would actually remember the exact time you met?) we were talking a lot I founded out that we have (needs to be past tense) a lot in common.
Johnny had no real family so we acted as if he was my older brother. Johnny was a true friend he would help me out out if I was in trouble. Johnny loved the book Gone with the Wind. Johnny really cared deeply for his frineds he would do any thing for them. I will best rember him when he saved me and the little kids. Like he all ways said stay gold saty gold. (firstly - what does stay gold mean to Ponyboy and secondly - this paragraph has more than one topic: stay gold, friendship, books, being a hero. A paragraph should focus on one point only)
Johnny had no real family so we acted as if he was my older brother. Johnny was a true friend he would help me out out if I was in trouble. Johnny loved the book Gone with the Wind. Johnny really cared deeply for his frineds he would do any thing for them. I will best rember him when he saved me and the little kids. Like he all ways said stay gold saty gold. (firstly - what does stay gold mean to Ponyboy and secondly - this paragraph has more than one topic: stay gold, friendship, books, being a hero. A paragraph should focus on one point only)
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