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Thursday, 24 November 2011
Genetically modified foods
I disagree with the genetically modified foods because it isn’t right for scientist to mess around with natural genes of plants and animals. In the long term genetic modified foods may be the cause of changes that are undesirable or directly dangerous. Genetically modified foods could be dangerous to eat, and we don’t how what the effects would be. It’s wrong to introduce the DNA of one species into the genes of another like fish genes in tomato plants to protect it from frost.
The scientists are trying to play god which they are interfering with nature. Scientists aren’t sure about the long the term effect of the genetically modified foods. Playing around with DNA is wrong, they shouldn’t play around with the DNA if they don’t know what the side effects are. It could risk peoples health, life and there allergies.
By Courtland
Wednesday, 23 November 2011
Great effects. Pity about the plot. This is a film critic’s review. I completely agree and understand this review because for technology in the 90’s (which wasn’t that great in that era), it was amazing to see how detailed and real looking the dinosaurs actually were. I did find the plot to be a bit boring because like all movies of that era, they always end with a good ending. It would have been a great movie if there was a twist in which it looked like they made it out but then a disaster strikes them and they died. I also didn’t like the fact that they used a lot of scientific words which can confuse a lot of the viewers. Because a lot of the viewers of the movie are around 15 to 25 years of age. I do agree with the film critic one hundred percent. This movie is actually a recommendation for people with a very large knowledge of dinosaurs and the people who want to learn about the dinosaurs in a movie way or have a really easy understandings of scientific words. I would give this a movie rating of 3 out of 10.
Do we right to play with Nature
Some people believe that food should be genetically modified so that way it will be larger. Some people believe that it is ‘playing god’. If you want my opinion, I reckon that only certain foods should be modified such as wheat, barley, oats and rice. Other foods such as vegetables, meat, dairy products and poultry should not be genetically modified because they are more likely to be harmful to humans because they can cause allergies, gene transfer and they are also more prone to pesticide diseases. There has been mass criticising about scientist genetically modifying food and there has actually been cases of hippies destroying and stealing the food. In 1996, genetically modified food was first legally sold on the market. But it was soon taken off for health reasons, because some people were affected by it. I agree with but then I don’t..
Monday, 21 November 2011
Modified Foods
Genetically Modified Food!
I disagree with genetically modified foods because it is not right for scientist to mess with the natural genes of plants and animals. I don’t think it is appropriate for scientists to interfere when humans have survived perfectly fine before they started to modified food. I know scientists are just trying to improve the world’s food supply but there is simply no need for it. It’s also very dangerous to modify the foods e.g. if scientists use fish genes in tomatoes to protect the tomatoes from frost, the consumer might have an allergy to fish and could have an allergic reaction to the tomato. It is not right for scientist to modify years of natural development for basically no reason at all, and there are only a very few amount who would prefer genetically modified foods over natural food, so it would not be a big loss if they stopped modifying foods.
Lori Aitchison!
Jurassic Park!
Genetically modified food is something that may cause long term risk if scientists don’t know what they are doing but is it possible to know the risks of genetically modified foods in a constantly changing world.
I disagree with genetically modified foods because scientists are just trying to play god which means they are interfering with nature. Genetically modified food causes many concerns including environmental hazards, health risks and economic concerns. Some of the health risks could be that many people may be allergic to two genes that could be modified together which could cause serious illness or even death. Bringing genetically modified foods to the shops is a lengthy and costly process. If these plant crops cross-pollinate with each other, it could make a new plant which could be harmful to people and the environment. Then, if this happens a new gene would be introduced called the ‘suicide gene’ which would be put into the genetically modified food plant. This means that the plant would only grow for one season and their seeds wouldn’t germinate but then farmers would have to buy a fresh supply of seeds each year. However, farmers from the third world countries might not be able to afford new seeds each year and then that could put them out of business.
In conclusion, genetically modified foods aren’t really necessary because there is no reason to cause a risk to health and the environment if we can already manage without the modified foods.
By Alana!
Do we have the right to interfere with nature? - Mad
I think we should genetically modify food. It would be a good thing to do because it would save a lot of animals and help the farmers a lot. We could make fruits and vegetable that is frost resistant which would help farmers to get more money for their crops. It would also help by making plants vulnerable to pests and other thing that eat plants. If we were to genetically modify food we could make food that is drought resistant. It would also help the poor countries because they would be able to grow food which grows faster and we would be able to give them food. We could also make food which can grow all year round instead of growing in different seasons.
It would also help with people health; we could put extra nutrition in some types of food. We could also make fat food that is a lot healthier but still tastes good. Also if we genetically modified food it would be a lot cheaper for people to buy. It would be cheaper because there would be a lot more of it.
So I think genetically modified food would be a good thing and it would solve a lot of problems we have to do with food.
is the critic right? -- Mad
Is the Critic Right? - Mad
“Great effects. Pity about the plot”
I think what the critic said is a fair statement. I think it meant that it had really good effects for a movie made in the 90’s but had a really bad story line that wasn’t all that interesting. When they say “great effects” they talk about how the dinosaurs and the environment looked. They looked realistic and moved as they would of millions of years ago. Also when they say “Pity about the plot” I think they meant that the story line wasn’t that good and the actors weren’t playing their role that well to make it more realistic.
I agree with the stamen because I think it fits the movie well. I didn’t like the movie that much because the plot wasn’t that good.
Friday, 18 November 2011
Hi Year 9 English
Hi Guys
It's great to see some of your work going up on the blog. I've read some of it and it's looking good. Remember that this work is being assessed and I have noticed some errors - there would not be many if any posts that don't have some errors. They are only short pieces of writing so please have a go at getting them perfect.
Hope everything else is going well and you are looking after Mr. Wilson.
Is the fish still alive?
Critic
Critic Statement:
“Great effects. Pity about the plot!”
The Critic is basically saying that he or she likes the look of the dinosaurs and the small things that happened to make the movie look good. For example the fence sparks and the dinosaur’s snot that gets all over John Hammond’s granddaughter. The critic also says that the plot wasn’t that good which means that he or she didn’t like the main story and thought it could have been better.
I agree with the critic. I didn’t mind the graphics. Considering the age of the movie it had good graphical technology. I really disliked the plot, also it was very predictable and also it could have been longer and it had a horrible storyline.
Film Critic Review
I don’t agree with the review which said Great effects, Pity about the plot. I liked the plot and the effects and even know the effects were great and the plot wasn’t probably quite as good but it was still pretty good. This movie was made quite a long time ago so for them it was probably one of the most popular movies when it came out and was new.
If this film critic was right this wouldn’t have been such a popular movie when it came out and they wouldn’t of went on and made more of them if they didn’t sell them and make money out of them. If I had to give this movie a rate out of ten I would probably give it a 9/10 for the affects when it was made and for the plot I would give it a 7/10 which is still pretty good and overall I would give it a 8/10 for when it was made.
Do we have the right to interfere with nature?
In Jurassic park they played around with DNA in dinosaurs and doing that is sort of like playing around with modified food. I don’t think that we should play around modified food because I think it should all be natural and we don’t know the affects that it could have on us in the future if we keep eating it. I don’t think we should play with modified foods because I think we should just have what comes straight out the ground with no chemical.
When they played around with DNA and dinosaurs it all went wrong and look what ended happening at the end of the movie. I think that if they play with modified food the same sort of thing could happen and it could all go wrong and people could get sick from it if they haven’t tested it enough like they didn’t on Jurassic Park.
By Shae
Do We Have the Right to Interfere With Nature?
Jurassic Park
The critic statement is trying to say that the effect from the movie like, the animations of the dinosaurs, the effects of the jungle, island, and the different areas were the dinosaurs are kept, and how the dinosaurs move around and how they attack each other when hunting there pray. He also said that he didn’t like the plot of the movie because the way it was set up and, how they got Dr Grant and Ellie from there archaeological dig and brought them to the Jurassic park island and they had look around then got in the car and then everything started to happen and dinosaurs started to escaped and the system shut down.
I disagree with the critic because I like the effects and the plot, I liked how the dinosaurs felt real and the animations of the dinosaurs hunting, eating and playing and how they react to human and how the baby dinosaur hatched and all the fake blood looked real. How the people problem solved everything with the computer system.
By Courtland
Is The Critic Right?
- Meghan Clifford
Jurassic Park!
The critic is trying to say that they liked the effects from the movie, such as, the look of the dinosaurs, the look of the park and how the dinosaurs moved around. He also said that he didn’t like the plot of the movie which means he didn’t like the way the movie was set out. This could mean that he is trying to say that he didn’t like how the movie started of bad by the worker getting eaten and continued like that until to very end when the little girl saved the day by hacking the computer.
I disagree with the critic because I liked the effects and the plot. For example I liked how the dinosaurs looked real and acted like they would of when they lived. I also liked how the people reacted when the dinosaurs were chasing them and how they problem solved when the IT guy turned the power off.
By Alana!
Is The Critic Right - Jurassic Park
Is the Critic right?
I disagree with the critic saying ‘Great effects. Pity about the plot’ as I think that the Jurassic park has a good plot. The movie in my opinion was deadly, exciting and interesting. The fact that the directors had thought about how dinosaurs could actually be created, made the movie a bit more realistic. Also the plot I thought was set out in a way that it kept the viewer interested, e.g. when the man got killed by the raptor in the opening scene made the viewer interested in the rest of the movie.
However I agree with the critic when he said that there were great effects, but the movie was first released in 1993 so the special effect have got a lot better since then, but overall for back then I thought the special effects were great. The way the dinosaurs moved around and the overall appearance was what I thought actual dinosaurs would look like.
Friday, 21 October 2011
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Wednesday, 7 September 2011
Litter presentation by Courtland and Meghan
Tuesday, 6 September 2011
Litter Presentation By Lori and Alana
Friday, 26 August 2011
Litter Solutions by Madison and Shae
Thursday, 25 August 2011
Reducing Litter at School by Rory, Brad and Jack
Monday, 4 July 2011
courtland's - explanation
Friday, 1 July 2011
How to get out of doing maths homework in Mr Charlton’s class DRAFT
In Mr Charlton’s maths class is quite hard to get out of homework; you have to think of really good reasons to get out of it. Reading this will help you think of better reasons for not doing your homework.
There are a number of ways to get out of homework in Mr Charlton’s class and not get more homework. One is family emergency you could say that you had a family member that is really ill and you had to take them to the hospital and that you would not leave there side.
The first step is to explain that one of your family members is really ill. You have to tell Mr Charlton that one of your family member’s is ill and you had to take them to the hospital and that you stayed there with them.
The second step if he does not believe you you’ll have to get a note in your diary signed by your parents saying that you didn’t do your home work because you were at the hospital waiting to see one of the family member’s.
The third step if he still does not believe you get him to ring up your family and get them to tell him that what you said was true and that you have a reason for not doing your homework.
I think that what I told you should work if you have one of those reasons so just get a note or get your parents to ring up and say why you did not do your homework
By Brad Browne
Minecraft Basics Explanation
When you spawn look around and see where you are and then mark your spawn with a piece of sand or anything you wish. If you spawn in an area with mountains around it is a good idea to make a small house inside of the actual mountain because it is helpful. But at the moment you need to go and look for some trees. If you have spawned near a mountain there should always be a forest filled with trees.
Make some wood planks out of the wood you have collected and make a crafting table then make a wooden pick axe. A wooden pick axe is a horrible tool but if you didn’t make one you wouldn’t get very far in the game at all. Make sure you have collected the crafting table that you made earlier then make your house by using the pick axe.
Once you have cut out a reasonable amount from the mountain from your house it is time to upgrade your tools so make yourself a stone pickaxe. By now it is nearly night so you will want some coal 3 pieces of wool and a door. Go and get some wool and coal is usually found inside a mountain so it is easy to find. Go to get about 10 pieces of sand and go to your house.
You should be able to make a furnace with the cobble you have collected, but first you’ll want to make that door for your house so no monsters can get in. Now you will be thinking “Why do I need this worthless sand?” well you need some windows. Now make a furnace and if you have enough wood OR coal you will want to make some windows by putting the sand into the furnace. Now while the glass is cooking make a bed and some torches. Put the door down at the spot of your choice and then the bed and go to sleep. Make some holes to put the windows in then put the glass in. Then light up your room with the torches that you made. Now you have got a good hideout to be safe from the monsters at night.
This is a guide made for the people having a hard time with this game. I hope this helps you play this game without dying all of the time.
Thursday, 30 June 2011
Meghan's Explanation
Wednesday, 29 June 2011
Now it's time to add some decorations and electrical equipment to the tank. Once you choose what decorations you want to place in the tank, make sure you wash them before putting them in the tank. Also have a mixture of real and artificial plants. A filter is needed to maintain clear and healthy water. A heater is also needed to maintain the right temperature for your fish.
Explanation
Friday, 17 June 2011
How to write an 'Explanation'
We will be using the following website to learn about writing an 'Explanation'. It will be a useful resource for you to use.
http://www.writingfun.com/writingfun2010.html
Johnny's Eulogy Courtland
Johnny had no real family, we were his family, the gang was there for Johnny if he needed a place to stay he was always welcome. Johnny was like a little brother in the gang, everyone cared so much about Johnny. Johnny made the gang stay together, he got along with the gang. (using the word 'gang' too much, can you think of another word to use?)
Johnny was a true friend, he cared about his friends alot. Johnny would care about what ever you tell him, he would listen what you have to say. If you were upset johhnny would always be there.
Johnny really loved the book called, " Gone With The Wind". He would always ask me if I could read the book. Johnny loved the gang. He was always with the gang. (The last two sentences sound like they have been added on without any real connection to the previous sentences plus you have mentioned these points already in previous paragraphs)
Johnny cared deeply for his friends, he always there for the gang and he cared about the guys.(again repeating what you have said above) Johnny was always there for me. when something would happen to me Johnny would be there for me and made sure I was ok.
I will best remember Johnny as a young brave boy, he put his life on a hook (on the line) to save those kids in the church.
The Outsiders
Johnny had no real family so we acted as if he was my older brother. Johnny was a true friend he would help me out out if I was in trouble. Johnny loved the book Gone with the Wind. Johnny really cared deeply for his frineds he would do any thing for them. I will best rember him when he saved me and the little kids. Like he all ways said stay gold saty gold. (firstly - what does stay gold mean to Ponyboy and secondly - this paragraph has more than one topic: stay gold, friendship, books, being a hero. A paragraph should focus on one point only)
Wednesday, 15 June 2011
Johnny's Eulogy - Alana
Johnny had no real family. The gang was his family and he was always welcome at my house. He was loved very much by the gang and was like another brother to me.
Johnny was a true friend. He would sit down and listen to anything anyone had to say and wouldn't judge.
Johnny loved it when I read, "Gone with the Wind" to him at the old church. Johnny wanted to travel the whole country and I wish I could still do that with him.
I will always remember the time when Johnny and I were at the old church and he saved those kids. He was a real hero.
Johnny was my best friend.
Writing your eulogy
He might focus on what a gallant person Johnny was. Possibly he might discuss how supportive Johnny was. He might talk about the obstacles Johnny had overcome in life. He would most certainly have used literature references in the eulogy ie comparing Johnny to the gallant southern gentlemen from the novel Gone with the Wind.
Here's an important quote from Johnny maybe it would be useful for Ponyboy when writing his eulogy.
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Johnnys Eulogy
Johnny had no real family. He use to run away from home to the park or my house and talk to me about his family. So us Greasers took him as our little brother even though he was older than me and we would always look after him. He was a real nice kid and was loved by all of us.
Johnny was a true friend to me. Where ever I'd go he went and where ever he went I'd go. We would always hang out at the park and go to the movies. We use to always look out for each other. I will never forget that time when he saved my life.
Johnny loved the gang more than anything, it was all he had. Johnny also loved the novel 'Gone with the wind'. I'd use to read it to him at the church. Johnny also had a dream that he didn't get to achieve. He always wanted to go somewhere else the beside here. The first time he ever left here was when we went to the country (Windrixville).
Johnny's Eulogy
-Ponyboy Curtis
Tuesday, 14 June 2011
Johnny's Eulogy---Lori
Johnny didn't come from the best of families so we were his family. The greasers were his brothers, he knew we had his back through no matter what. He was a good friend and you could tell him anything and he would sit there, listening and never judging.
Johnny loved when I read to him, because he couldn't read that well he found it easier to listen to me. Johnny wanted to travel the country, he wanted to see and do so many different things and I wish I could still travel with him.
I will always remember when Johnny and I were up in the old church, the things we did and talked about to kill time were some of my best memories with Johnny.
Johnny died a hero and I wish that when I die I would die noble and for a good cause, like Johnny, not in some stupid rumble in the lot.
Johnny was my best buddy and I will always remember him...
Ponyboy Curtis
The Outsiders - Eulogy
Johnny had no real family. We were his family. His mates were like his brothers. He was the pet of our gang.
Johnny was a true friend, always helping his friends. He'd risk anything for us. He didn't go to school. He spent his time with his mates. He had never left this town. The only time he did was with me for a few weeks.
Johnny loved just being with the people he loved and cared about. We used to go to the drive in with Dally. He would do pretty much anything. He also enjoyed the book "Gone with the Wind." The scar across his face was from when he got bashed. That scar or that memory never stopped never stopped him from doing the things he loved to do.
Johnny cared deeply for his friends. Like I said before, he'd do anything to make them happy. He cared about them so much. We were all the family he never had.
I will never forget Johnny. He was always smiling and having fun with his mates. No matter how much pain he was in. Johnny died because he risked his life to save others.
The one poem that will always remind me of Johnny was written by Robert Frost.
Nature's first green is gold,
Her hardest hue to hold.
Her early leaf's a flower;
But only so an hour.
Then leaf subsides to leaf.
So Eden sank to grief.
So dawn goes down to day.
Nothing gold can stay.
- Megziee Bro xD
Wednesday, 8 June 2011
Deep Sea Anglerfish!
3 head frog
ROR's THING!
- Size: Between 12 to 16 Inches.
- Habitat: World Wide.
- Depth Range: Over 2,000 Feet Deep.